#11 – A Church Street haiku

Large breasts a-bouncing
she pushes the twins along
in the autumn wind

-Mr. Beatnick

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3 responses to “#11 – A Church Street haiku

  1. Hmm, should that perhaps read ‘large breasts a-bouncing? Large Breasts Abounding?

  2. baddalstonshortfiction

    You’re right. Super-ego edit to follow toute suite.

  3. is this the pilooski re-edit?

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